david142's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Her and Mine 1001 Wishes]

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I just don't know what to say. this is the best work i've seen EVER here on newgrounds when you look at the story. the only thing that could be a little improved are the graphics, but hey, then you would be like adam phillips. anyways, I think you deserve more than a 10

[Freerun: Go-Man, Scene 1]

WOOW

woosh and it was over man, and strict-viewer is just 10 years, but you hyave to be at least 13 so they should ban him from newgroudns, and to strict-viewer himself, WHY in hell would this be gay. you probably are gonna have to come out of the closet yourself

[Armageggon]

jeah

hahah that was great, but, what was in the egg though? :P

[Utopia]

very nice flash

i've seen better, and i've seen a lot more that were worse. i think maybe it was a little to long. that means that certain things were shown again and again. on the graphics, maybe you should work a little on the walking sequence. and that you only drew one tree was a little disapointing. however a nice story and it may be clear why this should be on frontpage

Vuny responds:

AH! You've spotted my 1 tree. lol Thank you for the tips.

[Ed the robot - Pet]

wel i was very impressed by the graphics

the only thing the movie could use were some backgrounds but. however,can you briefly tell me how you made the lighting effects in the robbot's caus i could see that it was not only gradient u used. keep em coming:p

MasterFury responds:

to do the lighting. first make you mage with a radial gradiant with what ever color you want then select the object and copy it past it on a new layer get rid of the out lines make it smaller then fill the new layer with a white to nothing gradient and play with the setting of it for a while youll get it after a while.

[The beginning (part 1)]

FINALY

at last. someone who says it's is his first flash, AND THAT WASN'T fucked up. normaly if someone says, it's my first flash, it's like. 2 frames long or something. keep going. but perhaps make the next one a bit longer

wEiRdO-dUde responds:

Thanks, I appreciate it. I might finish it, or I might re-do it without the stick figures, like propper charactars. I'll keep working on flash, thanks for the comment

[-Karma Police-]

man to bad

it is really fucked up that the graphics are not that good. because the story, the music etc are really well put together. 7/10 just becoz of the graphics man. next time work on that, and you will be on front page

[Buffy: TVS -conclusion-]

ok it was ok

the only thing i mis is backgrounds, if only you would draw 2 or 3 backgrounds, wich you use over again, (at least you don't have many more scenes) it would look like 200% better

i think you should use this comment and make it better, however i've protected your movie

Mutant-Enemy responds:

thanks ill work on it

[Gen-X : Chapter 1]

you deserved 5/5 becoz of originality

great voiceacting ,nce graphics, great story
good job

einstei responds:

Thank you man. That's really encouraging.